英语写作(二)

(2)the more...the more....越....越....

这个句型叫做the+adj/adv比较级+句子,the+adj/adv比较级+句子。(主将从现哟!)

the后面加形容词还是副词取决于后面这个句子的谓语动词是系动词还是实义动词,如果谓语是实义动词用副词,如果是系动词用形容词

本句型推荐写在作文的第二段分析原因的时候使用

Eg:文化交流的越频繁,经济发展越迅速

The more frequently cultures are exchanged, the more rapidly Chinese economy will develop.

可数名词永远不能单独使用,如果不确定是不是可数,加the最保险。

例句1:你爬的越高看的越远   (没有特指的一个人用one,没有特指的多个人用those)

The higher one ascends , the farther he will overlook.

(farther指真实距离的远,further指抽象距离的远)

例句2:你学习的越努力,你越容易取得成功。 (努力:diligent)

The more diligent one keeps,the more easily he will achieve glories.

一句话需要动词又没有动词用be动词;

keep是系动词后面跟形容词diligent,‘容易’是修饰‘取得’的,‘取得’是实义动词,副词修饰实义动词,使用副词easily。

例句3:越努力,越幸运。(所有人都是)

The harder all children and adult remain, the more fortunate they will become.

作业:用the more ...the more...句型写为什么做人一个有自信

(一)并列句满分表达

1、and but 句型

And------->likewise/similarly/in the meanwhile/at the same time   都翻译为‘并且’

But-------->conversely/by contrast/On the contrary/ conversely/nevertheless都翻译为‘但是’

描述图画的分类

1)一幅图

1、一幅图,一个主体,两个动作(主要/次要)

2、一幅图,两个主体,两个动作

2)两幅图

在描述图画的时候记住:除非有明显的过去时间,描述图画都用现在进行时,因为现在进行时描述更生动。

描述图画----一般现在时

描述图表----一般过去

In the picture, the goalkeeper is imagining himself exceedingly small. On the contrary, the player is assuming his rival(对手)as big as a hill.

在第一幅图画当中,温室里的花朵生长的很健康,但是在第二幅图画中,这朵花就凋零了。

In the former picture, the flower in the greenhouse is growing healthily. Conversely, in the latter one, it is dying.

And but句型推荐写在作文的第一段,描述一幅图两个主体两个动作的时候使用,或者是两幅图的时候使用。

替换Picture----> picture/cartoon/drawing/painting/caricature/photograph

作业:描述追星这幅作文

2、not only ....but also...句型

本句型推荐写在作文的第二段,分析原因的时候使用

例句1:养宠物的好处

养宠物能减少老人的孤单

Raising pets can reduce the loneliness of senior citizens.

养宠物能培养小孩子的善良

Raising pets can cultivate the kindness of kids.

合并:

Raising pets not only can educe the loneliness of senior citizens but also can cultivate the kindness of kids.

例句2:为什么应该孝敬父母

孝敬父母不但是一个中华民族的传统美德,而且是子女的法定义务。

Supporting the elderly not only keeps a Chinese conventional virtue but also proves the legal responsibility of their offspring.

例句3:合作/自信/乐观/文化交流 不但能够使我们交到更多的朋友,而且还能使我们取得更大的成功。

Enable sb to do sth/ have sb do sth 使某人做某事

成功、成就、荣耀:glories

表扬、嘉奖、荣誉、荣誉、成就:credits

Cooperation not only enables all children and adults to make more intimate friends but also has them achieve greater credits.

(二)复合句的满分表达

一)主语从句

l (That you never fail to fascinate me) is obvious.

It is obvious (that you never fail to fascinate me)

主语从句的满分表达就是把主语从句放到句末去,加it做形式主语。

主语从句常见的满分表达是it....that...

It proves common knowledge that....显而易见,总所周知

It proves self-evident that.... 显而易见,总所周知

It seems beyond dispute that....超越了争论---->显而易见,总所周知

It is universally acknowledged that.....显而易见,总所周知

It has been widely accepted that.... 显而易见,总所周知

It keeps my perspective that= i think that...  我认为

(选两个记忆----大作文写一个小作文写一个)

可以写在作文中任何一句话的前面来拉长句子

本句型推荐写在大作文第一段第一句话的前面,用来引出推荐的图画或图表。

更好的主语从句的变体是把it写成what,在that前面加is

Eg:   What proves common knowledge is that.....

已经变成了两个从句:1、what引导的主语从句 2、that引导的宾语从句

二)同位语和同位语从句

1、名词作同位语

只要在作文中见到名词,都可以在后面加一个名词,作为它的同位语出现。

大作文最多出现两次名词作同位语。

My boyfriend, a rich businessman, really has no much time to accompany me, an attractive girl.

一个男人把贝克汉姆的名字写在他的脸上

A man,a soccer fan, is writing the name, a symbol of someone, of Beckham , an esteemed sportsman, on his face, some part of the body.

2、同位语从句

1、她长着一双大眼睛这个事实表明她是一个美女;

The evidence( that she has a pair of big eyes )manifests(表明) (that she keeps a beauty.)

同位语从句+宾语从句

2、很多女生都已经穿上了漂亮的花裙子,这个事实表明夏天已经来了。

The evidence that a host of girls have wore beautiful colorful skirts manifests that summer is around the corner.

......样的事实表明了.....

本句型推荐写在作文第二段分析原因的时候使用,它的模板是the evidence that + 一个表示原因的简单句+ manifests that +文章的中心句。

为什么说污染很严重?

我们再也见不到明亮的星星和皎洁的月光了,这个事实表明污染变得越来越严重了。

The evidence that bright stars and pure moonlights fail to be detected manifests that environment contamination is becoming increasing fatal.

例句:国产车的价格变得越来越低了,这个事实表明国产车在中国更受到欢迎

他们能够享受到一个更高质量的生活水平,这个事实表明,更多的农民涌入大城市。

The evidence that farmers can enjoy high quality life, manifest that most of them would like to swarm into big cities.

三)定语和定语从句

1、定语的成分

①形容词修饰名词

②介词短语修饰名词

③名词修饰名词

④非谓语动词修饰名词

⑤从句

2、定语和定语从句在写作中的使用

只要在作文中见到名词,都可以给它加一个定语的成分,把句子拉长。但是在第一段描述图画的时候只要见到名词通常都要加定语,使图画的描述显得很生动。

一个....美国小女孩正穿着少数民族的传统服饰

An American girl young as well as graceful is wearing Chinese conventional costume which keeps pervasive(遍布的,普遍的)in the south of China.

Immense amounts of children and adults sitting in seperate rooms are surfing on the internet.

描述图画的万能定语:

1、好的:

用as well as连接两个形容词:cute,lovely,little; graceful elegant; young;

Enthusiastic,passionate; confident,energetic;

Aggressive  ambitious

Who looks distinctly impressive to readers(给读者留下深刻印象的--->万能定从)

2、坏的:

Fat, cruel, ugly

Negative, dispassioned  消极悲观的

Terrible, disgusting,disgraceful 不好的

Who looks rather less impressive to readers.

3、定语从句的满分表达

他是一个色狼是显而易见的

He looks like a lady-killer, which has been widely accepted.

定语从句的满分表达就是which可以引导修饰前面整个句子的定语从句,和前面的句子用逗号隔开。

定语从句的满分表达可以写在作文中任何一个陈述句后面,但是推荐写在中文第二段某个比较短的原因后面用来拉长句子。

1)which leaves us a deep impression

2)which provokes the public’s widespread concerns.

3)which brings up the unnecessary/unexpected trouble

4)which gives rise to dreadful consequences

国产车的价格变得越低,越多的人愿意买国产车

The lower the price of cars made in China becomes, the more Chinese would like to purchase them, which leaves businessmen a deep impression.

四)状语和状语从句

1、什么是状语

只要在句子中见到一下的一坨东西就是状语:adv,时间,地点,原因,条件,让步,方式,结果,目的,伴随,比较状语

2、状语在写作中的使用

中文中的任何一句话都可以加给它加一个状语的成分把句子拉长,但是在第一段描述图画或图表的时候一定要加状语,使图画或图表的描述更完整。

描述图画的万能状语

In the center of the vivid picture.

描述原因的万能状语   推荐写在那个原因的中间作为插入语使用

1、as every one can see it. 显而易见,总所周知

2、With the rapid advance of science and technology.

3、In our contemporary society目前

4、In the general routine of everyday living在我们日常生活中

3、状语从句的满分表达
①让步状语从句

Although

Although引导的让步状语从句可以写在作文中任何一句话的旁边,但是推荐写在第二段分析原因的时候使用。

第二段原因分析句型已经讲了:the more..the more../not only...but also.../同位语从句/although引导的让步状语从句

第二段第一句话用there be 引出原因分析

为什么不应该盲目追星?

例句:盲目追星会影响青少年的身心健康   影响:exert great influence on

Pursuing celebrities blindly might exert great influence on physical and mental health of youngsters on campus although their singing sounds touching.

发展中国家的人变得越来越富有了

Private individuals from developing nations are becoming increasingly wealthy although

Although 引导的万能状语是:

Although many people fail to pay attention the issue. 虽然很多人还没有关注到这个问题

Pay attention to 的替换(记两个)

关注,重视:

Place great emphasis on;

Attach great importance to;

Shed light on;

Pour attention into

problem替换:issue  phenomenon现象  subject话题  the current situation现状

② so...that... 如此...以至于....

只要作文中出现形容词或副词的地方,都能写成so...that...句型,但是推荐写在第一段的最后一句话引出文章中心的时候使用或者是第三段的第一句话文章总结的时候使用。

已经推荐过 被动,as .... as, so...that....可以写在第一段最后一句话和第三段第一句话

生命如此短暂,以至于如何的度过都是一种浪费

Life proves so short that it is a waste how to spend it.

Sth keeps so vital that the problem should have been brought into the limelight. 带到聚光灯下

Sth becomes so fatal that the problem should have been brought into the limelight.引起我们关注

③分词作状语把分词放在句中的主谓之间作为插入语使用

I hate you, i will kill you.(x)

Hating you , i will kill you.(分词作状语)

I, hating you, will kill you.(★)

原文地址:https://www.cnblogs.com/hsp1269/p/12639329.html

时间: 2024-07-30 17:17:22

英语写作(二)的相关文章

【易说堂】33个英语写作加分句型学习

积极方面 1. give students/ citizen* *otivation to…给学生/公民动力去……  2. narrow the gap between the wealthy and the impoverished 减少贫富差距 3. curb crimes 控制犯罪 4. allocate money to投资于…5. promote the development of… 促进…的发展6. It is obvious that…显而易见,… 7. play a key r

通过R语言统计考研英语(二)单词出现频率

通过R语言统计考研英语(二)单词出现频率 大家对英语考试并不陌生,首先是背单词,就是所谓的高频词汇.厚厚的一本单词,真的看的头大.最近结合自己刚学的R语言,为年底的考研做准备,想统计一下最近考研英语(二)真正单词出现的频率次数. 整体思路: 收集数据-->整理数据-->统计分析-->输出结果 使用工具: `Rstudio,文本编辑器,CSV` 涉及到的包: "jiebaR"(中文分词引擎),"plyr", 第一步收集数据: 从网络搜索2013-20

考研英语写作

英语学习 考研英语写作 对真题的精研最后一定要掌握五个方面: 词汇:没有一个词汇不认识 选项:没有一个选项不认识 句子结构:没有一个句子结构不明白 英译汉:最笨的方法往往是最好的方法 背诵:背诵一篇自己觉得最难的文章,或出错最多的文章 大纲解读 写作关键:语法,结构,内容 语言:注重平淡如水,简洁为美 语法易错点:时态,冠词,主谓一致 1.精炼的短句放段首表强调,复杂的长句可以进行具体的论证 2.正式的表达 原文地址:https://www.cnblogs.com/zwz178/p/959417

【考研 - 英语】2005年考研英语写作A节详解(内容摘自2020《考研英语高分写作 》王江涛)

2005年写作真题详解 一.作文题目 Part A Directions: Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Design & Fashion(1). But now you find that the work is not what you expected(2). You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr Wang, telling him yo

学术写作二

本文是学术写作的第二篇,用来学习第二周课的内容,上周课主要讲了针对研究的题目提出topic, 再根据topic来寻找key term. 这节课中,我们学习 Finding Sources and Note Taking  use a library database to find academic sources identify some news source that may be acceptable sources do orgainzed research through note

基础英语(二):Unit2

一,基础词汇 1,more than more than 20 years I am more than happy to help you I am sure conditions over there will more than satisfy your requirements (over there) she wa dressed more than simply (more than) I was more than a little shaken by his deeds It n

学习英语之二

history math science English art music history math science English art music history math science English art music history math science English art music history math science English art music =======================================================

2017年考研英语二真题与答案(最新)

2017年全国硕士研究生入学统一考试英语(二) Section I Use of English Directions: Read the following text. Choose the best word (s) for each numbered blank and mark A, B, C or D on the ANSWER SHEET. (10 points) People have speculated for centuries about a future without

论文写作经验 集萃

IEEE ICIP: International conference on Image Processing 图像处理领域最具影响力国际会议,一年一次 图像处理 IEEE ICASSP: International Conference on Acoustics, Speech and Signal Processing 是语音和声学信号处理领域最权威的国际学术会议之一,也是图像.视频信号处理领域的权威会议之一,每年举办一次 信号处理 英文投稿的一点经验[转载] From: http://ch